I think I got the inttention here, but saddly is not pretty well performed, next time I suggest to avoid the spinning background, the detail of the elevator guy and the lipsynch wasn't that bad, but you should had performed better for the dance (the riding moves are not very well performed)
Next time put a little more effort in the animation and variety on it, recycling frames are good resource, but don't abuse them in suations like this
I hope to see you perform better next time ^_^